Saturday, November 6, 2010

8 I/J 13 Ways of Looking at a Blackbird

--This is a famous poem by Wallace Stevens that looks at one particular thing--in this case a Blackbird--thirteen different ways. Can you emulate this poem by writing one of your own with thirteen different stanzas? Each stanza should have a different perspective on a NYC related subject. Title your piece, "Thirteen ways of looking at a ____________."

Try it out. Even though you might not understand every stanza of Stevens' poem, challenge yourself to emulate the structure of his stanzas, his use of figurative language and his use of concise imagery.

These are some ideas that you may use to compose your own poem. However you are free to come up with an idea of your own as well:

13 Ways of Looking at New York City
13 Ways of Looking at the Lower East Side
13 Ways of Looking at New York City Garbage
13 Ways of Looking at Pigeons
13 Ways of Looking at New Yorkers
13 Ways of Looking at the Subway
13 Ways of Looking at NYC traffic
13 ways of Looking at Tompkins Square Park
13 Ways of Looking at Times Square
etc...

Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird
1
Among twenty snowy mountains
The only moving thing
Was the eye of the blackbird.

2
I was of three minds,
Like a tree
In which there are three blackbirds.

3
The blackbird whirled in the autumn winds.
It was a small part of the pantomime.

4
A man and a woman
Are one.
A man and a woman and a blackbird
Are one.

5
I do not know which to prefer,
The beauty of inflections
Or the beauty of innuendoes.
The blackbird whistling
Or just after.

6

Icicles filled the long window
With barbaric glass.
The shadow of the blackbird
Crossed it, to and fro.
The mood
Traced in the shadow
An indecipherable cause.

7
O thin men of Haddam,
Why do you imagine golden birds?
Do you not see how the blackbird
Walks around the feet
Of the women about you?

8
I know noble accents
And lucid, inescapable rhythms;
But I know, too,
That the blackbird is involved
In what I know.

9
When the blackbird flew out of sight,
It marked the edge
Of one of many circles.

10
At the sight of blackbirds
Flying in a green light,
Even the bawds of euphony
Would cry out sharply.

11
He rode over Connecticut
In a glass coach.
Once, a fear pierced him,
In that he mistook
The shadow of his equipage
For blackbirds.

12
The river is moving.
The blackbird must be going.

13
It was evening all afternoon.
It was snowing
And it was going to snow.
The blackbird sat
In the cedar limbs.

2 comments:

  1. Hey Greg,
    i was sitting on the subway today, just watching people across from me.I hope that doesn't come off as creepy or anything, but it really inspired me to write an emulation

    13 ways of looking at a New Yorker
    13 ways of looking at a New Yorker

    When you see neon glasses, with
    Fake leather boots, with rainbow streaked hair
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker.

    When you see 2 fingers sticking out from the sidewalk,
    An upside down mouth,
    And a coffee stain on his shirt,
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker.

    When you see a kid
    With too fancy clothes, Mary Janes
    And an up turned nose,
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker

    When you see dark circles,
    Blood shot eyes and
    Lip stick stained teeth,
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker

    When you see teenagers wearing
    Too tight skinny jeans,
    And saying “I want coffee” with an accent,
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker

    When you see a person yelling at
    A tourist for asking too many questions,
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker

    When you see a person
    Wearing sunglasses in a subway
    On a rainy day,
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker.

    When you see a woman making a scene,
    Trying to worm her way out of a ticket,
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker

    When you see a person pushing
    A dog in a baby carriage,
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker.

    When you see a person wearing a Met's t-shirt
    Screaming at a Red –Sox fan
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker.
    ( I like both the Mets and the REd Sox! Uh-oh)

    When you see a person eating a slice of pizza, folded in half,
    While trying to read the paper, while trying to carry her bag,
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker

    When you see a person sitting on a bench,
    Reading a copy of the New York Times,
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker.

    When you see a person on the subway,
    Peering at the person sitting next to them’s phone
    You just know that you’re looking at a New Yorker.

    You have to admit, you just KNOW that you’re looking at a New Yorker.

    Annique Wong 8J

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  2. I enjoyed this poem Annique! Thanks for sending it and keep up the observational writing.

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